tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post5566955469574392986..comments2024-01-25T15:42:13.467+00:00Comments on re-ravelling: Monday Mixer - Time to FlySarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07953334708365738152noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post-22127061108895392952013-01-29T10:58:29.015+00:002013-01-29T10:58:29.015+00:00Some very random words, but it made sense, and I l...Some very random words, but it made sense, and I like the idea of using Shrike as a name, especially as he appears to personify the nature of the birds!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post-69451069156621371182013-01-29T08:30:48.524+00:002013-01-29T08:30:48.524+00:00Well done Sarah. Lovely piece.Well done Sarah. Lovely piece.Anmeliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17369826778105722386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post-26158728495406760622013-01-29T06:44:30.523+00:002013-01-29T06:44:30.523+00:00Well done, this totally made sense, loved it.Well done, this totally made sense, loved it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post-39716007888901939862013-01-29T02:28:27.526+00:002013-01-29T02:28:27.526+00:00I love this. It brought a visual to my mind. Very ...I love this. It brought a visual to my mind. Very nice writing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01652927023006006468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post-72895310310311085632013-01-29T01:27:22.883+00:002013-01-29T01:27:22.883+00:00Ha! I cheated a bit too, with mine. I just couldn&...Ha! I cheated a bit too, with mine. I just couldn't figure out how to work Drachma in and it sounds a bit feminine. Love your story!Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01912641441536207956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175766962148214842.post-86881649476457666362013-01-28T23:51:45.275+00:002013-01-28T23:51:45.275+00:00What I love about this is that there is a symmetry...What I love about this is that there is a symmetry to the story - the words don't interrupt the story flow or feel forced - and I'm left with lots of questions to chew on!! Wonderful!!! ;) Bullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.com