Saturday, 9 June 2012

Five Sentence Fiction - Lost

OK it's been a while since I wrote anything, lots of thoughts flying round my head but for now and just for fun a five sentence fiction - thanks Lillie McFerrin for the inspiration...


She’d checked everywhere from the fridge to the fruit bowl and now she was getting frantic.

Clive had sent a text, “pack your passport and bikini we’re off to Acapulco.”

Why wasn’t her life as neat and tidy as her sister’s  - Mrs Two-Kids Two-Cars Two-Foreign-Holidays-a-Year.

Why wasn’t she as meticulously organised as Clive?

He could organise a successful bank raid and she couldn’t even find the bottom half of her favourite pink bikini.


  1. Oh I like her! More please...

    Mine is here:


  2. Ha! Loved it. I thought for sure it was the passport she lost. Years ago, I had a recurrent dream along that line. Stressful!

  3. Ha ha, I was with Victoria on that one ;)Very good!

  4. This one brought a smile to my face. She comes across as a delightful person. I hope she finds the bottom of that bikini and has a fabulous time. Have a feeling she deserves it.

  5. Ah! This makes me smile. I love the voice in thie piece and that unexpected last sentence is perfection. Love it!!!