Anna was one half of the duo responsible for the Once Upon A Time flash fiction writing contest last year that magically turned a whole quiver of us aspiring writerly folk into proper published authors!
She has recently set up Nine Muse Press, dedicated to helping and supporting indie authors.
And I'm not sure where she finds the time because she also goes by the moniker of #haplessbride as she busily plans her forthcoming wedding to Michael Loy.
In honour of such an auspicious occasion it has been decided, by the talented Laura, Rebekah and Miranda to produce an eBook of weddingy type flash fiction tales as a very special gift for the happy couple. (You can read the complete rules and regs here. And yes please add my tale into the eBook!)
The
Necklace of Tears
Being the
school summer holidays the tour party was mostly comprised of young families. A
collection of girls in princess party dresses, their brothers in mock armour eager
to escape and explore the grounds of the castle where the knights were putting
on a jousting tournament.
Most dads
were itching to leave by now too but this was the story guaranteed to make at
least one mother cry and squeeze her husband’s hand a little tighter.
Celeste
wasn’t sure why but she was always tremendously moved by these shows of
affection.
She had just
one more thing to show them, just one more story to tell.
“This is the Necklace of Tears and
it is surrounded by strong magic.
“Once upon a time the princess who
lived in this castle fell in love with a boy who worked in the stables called
Peter.”
The boys
groaned, eyes strayed for a glimpse out of the window. Celeste caught their
wandering attention.
“He was judged not to be a suitable
candidate for the princess’s hand in marriage and was sent instead on an almost
impossible quest. A quest across the seven seas to fight dragons and ogres. If
he made it back alive he could marry his bride.
“Peter had no fear of the terrors
that lay ahead and told the princess with complete confidence that she should
prepare for their wedding, midsummer’s eve one year from that day.
“The following year on midsummer’s
eve everything was ready, the castle sparkled, fresh flowers adorned every
room. Everything was perfect. As dusk approached the princess looked out of the
window to watch for Peter’s return.
“Eventually she spied a cloud of
dust on the road and her heart soared but as it drew nearer she could see that
Peter’s horse was not there and neither was he.
“Grief stricken at the news he was
lost in battle she started to cry. Eventually she sobbed so hard that all that
was left of her were her tears, each one that fell to the floor turned into a
crystal. Her maid collected every one, threading them into this beautiful
necklace.”
A little girl enraptured by the story tugged at her sleeve, “Where did she go?”
A little girl enraptured by the story tugged at her sleeve, “Where did she go?”
“Some say
she still wanders the castle waiting, a ghostlike figure haunting these halls.”
“And what
do you say?” asked a deep male voice from the back.
Celeste
hadn’t noticed this man earlier; he had no discernible family with him. His
face was scarred, one eye lid half closed in a grotesque manner.
“There’s
a theory that one day the stable boy will return and he will find her still waiting
for him. He will fasten the necklace about her neck and the tears will melt
away. I like that ending best of all.” She added wistfully.
”But sadly
that concludes our tour today, thank you for listening…”
Celeste
smiled at each family as they left and wished them well.
“You
never told us the princess’s name.”
Turning
she discovered the strange man was standing by the necklace.
“Celeste,
Princess Celeste.” She whispered.
“Just
like you.” He pointed to her name badge. “How long have you been working here?”
She hesitated;
it felt as if she was on the edge of dreaming, “I can’t really remember …
forever?”
“Do you
think the old magic will still work?”
Carefully
he lifted the necklace from the stand and placed it around her neck.
Suddenly
a wave of water broke forth washing away the tears of a thousand years or more.
Celeste now
stood in an elegant white bridal gown, a chain of daisies and buttercups
replaced the necklace of tears.
“Peter?”
“Yes my
love. You waited?”
“For a
thousand years and then some.”
“And will
you still marry me, even though the years have not been so kind to me and I am
battle weary?”
She
touched his face, scarred by evil sorcery, scorched by dragons’ breath, scratched
by vicious thorns. All of this he had endured for her, for love.
“Oh Peter
of course I will marry you!”
They
kissed, his scars melted just as the crystal tears had done, the magic was
undone.
And
naturally they lived…
…happily ever after!
I
make absolutely no apologies for the slushy ending would you seriously
want anything else at a wedding? I will leave it to others to write the
darker twisted tales. I look forward to reading them all...
To Anna and Michael
I wish you well on your magical journey,
may you have a long and happy life together
filled with many blessings.
Much love from Sarah xx
A perfect fairy tale for our Fairy Queen. Just lovely x
ReplyDeleteAw! This was so beautiful! I loved this enchanting story and I'm a sucker for slushy endings! :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful... I really, really love it...xx
ReplyDeleteOh that love could last 1000 years - beautiful story with a lovely ending - who doesn't love a little mush :-) x
ReplyDeleteOh... I cried a little bit there... *slaps self hard*
ReplyDeleteThe idea of the magic necklace and the eternal love was really quite wonderful. I loved the maid collecting the tears.
ReplyDeleteMy heart got all smooshy when he picked up the necklace.
ReplyDeleteMagical story, full of all things mush! *picks up tissues to wipe away sniffles*, just what the Dark Fairy Queen ordered!
ReplyDeleteSlushy endings give me goosebumps :-) I love it!!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully romantic and magical! Those crystal tears got me! Lovely.
ReplyDeleteAW!!! *sniffles* He found her!!
ReplyDeleteSooooo over the top romantic, I just can't even stand it and I want MOAR! <-- first use of moar, by the by, just waiting for the right moment to use it. And THIS was it, hands down.
Beautiful, friend, truly. KEEP IT UP!
I absolutely adore this tale. I thought I already commented but must have been on facebook. Pure fairy tale romance. Finding each other at last . . . you must never give up hope or love. Gorgeous. Have I said enough lol???
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