Wednesday, 12 December 2012

55 Word Challenge - Bright

It's a double blog day, a five sentence fiction earlier today and now a 55 Word Challenge...

Well I did get and honourable mention last week so it would be rude not to participate again!


“Bright” he used to call her, as if Bright were some derogatory name.

She always wished it was because she was colourful not just clever; she yearned for him to notice her.

Years later she still watched him on the daily commute but despite her bright orange hair, he always walked straight past, still oblivious.

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