Wednesday, 26 September 2012

Visual Dare - Frustrated

I have deleted my original 100 word Visual Dare story and reposted a better one here.

Sorry for any inconvenience.


  1. hmmmm being critical here but re-reading the story again the 5th sentence is rather cluttered.
    Should have stopped it at "hindquarters" and started the next sentence "Suddenly a young man..."
    I know I could change it but it's an insight into the world of my hasty editing!
    Also I am always open to suggestions of how to improve my writing so please feel free to comment...

  2. O my. This could DEFINITELY be a longer piece! I love the old tale of Jack & the Beanstalk, and adore what you've done with this and the "many years later..." angle.

    Will definitely be watching this space....I want to know more!!! Great job!

  3. definitely is a thought provoking twist on the known