Saturday, 19 January 2013

SatSunTails - Interloping Disaster

Having a bit of a flash fiction frenzy at the moment - well we are pretty much snowed in so what else is there to do on a cold January in Saturday except read, write and watch DVDs?

Glad to see that Rebecca Clare Smith is back with her SatSunTails - these prompts grabbed me straight away.

The following may be used as a sentence in your story OR provide a basis for it:-
“interloping disaster”
And here is your picture prompt:
 
I hope you enjoy my story, I had fun writing it.


This was the hottest ticket in town.  I’d paid Jimmy McDonald all of my pocket money for this moment even though it meant I would have to go without my usual visit to corner shop on the way home.

Sherbet lemons strangely lost their sparkle compared to being here in this sweet smelling heaven.

Everyone said Jimmy’s big sister Nancy could be a model with those long legs and well turned out ankles, from my prominent position I swooned with delight at my private viewing.

Of course I couldn’t see much above her ankles but at her feet was a bounty of mesmerising girl stuff. Every few seconds a manicured hand would reach down carefully plucking the desired potion from the treasure.

It was unfortunate that the talcum powder caused me to sneeze.

Nancy gave me such a disapproving look.

“Mum, Jimmy’s fat friend is underneath my bed and I think he’s stuck!”

4 comments:

  1. Hee hee, needed a lift this morning, thank you!

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    1. Glad to help - keep smiling :-) xx

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  2. Wow. HATE it when that happens. Cute take on this one.

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    1. I liked your story too.
      So far it looks like we will be sharing the spoils - have we scared everyone else off???

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